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Score rating

Score ingredients

Essay Score

75

Your score is near or slightly above the avarage of U.S. students and more and most instructors consider that a good score.

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What makes your score good

What hurts your score

statistics

Your Text Statistics

Number of characters: 2581

Number of characters without spaces: 2113

Number of words: 466

Number of unique words: 199

Number of significant words: 221

Number of stop words: 245

uniqueness

The uniqueness of the text

The level of unqieness is: 87%

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6.9% - http://theconversation.com/closing-the-computer-science-gender-gap-how-one-woman-is-making-a-difference-in-many-lives-41422

The uniqueness or originality of the text is your ticket to good grades! To submit a high-quality paper and receive positive feedback, you have to make it stand out. The best way to achieve that goal is to focus on your own skills and avoid plagiarism. Bear in mind that plagiarism is not always intentional; it can be a result of making wrong decisions during the writing process.

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Improve the uniqueness of the text with the following tips:

  • Research thoroughly
  • Reference all sources used
  • Keep sources in correct context
  • Instead of cutting and pasting, file and label your sources
  • Keep your own writing and your sources separate
  • When paraphrasing, acknowledge your sources explicitly
  • Quote sources properly
rhythmic

Rhythmic monotony

Robot Don discovered 3 errors in your essay:

The good paper needs life and rhythm! The foolproof strategy to avoid monotony in the text is to pay attention to the length of sentences. Writing sentences that have the same length is never a good idea primarily because they affect readability, make the paper monotonous, and reduce comprehension. Enrich the text with short, medium, and long sentences. Approximate length is less than 10 words for short, more than 10 words for medium, and 20-25 words for a long sentence.

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Strategies to avoid keyword stuffing include:

  • Strive to avoid putting words together that sound similar
  • Avoid repeating words within sentences
  • Vary sentence length
  • Improve your vocabulary skills
  • Look for synonyms of the words you tend to repeat the most
  • Avoid incorrect phrases
  • Focus on the quality rather using certain words only to reach the word count
wateriness

Wateriness

The total of words: 221

Percent of watery words: 3.5

Words without water: 216

Stop words

Count

first

1

hope

1

so

1

go

2

The watery content of text shows how it is full of irrelevant words, such as prepositions, conjunctions, frequently used momentum and others do not carry any meaning of the word. Typically, the water content (watery) is measured in percentage and indicates the ratio of irrelevant words to the total number of words in the text. Normal 20-40%. Anything less gives the text dry/formality, and more than 40% make it blurry. The rate of water flow in the text can be used to determine its quality, as wateriness directly affects the perception and talks about informative/emotional.

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To make the text of your essay less watery try to substitute stop words given in the list above into meaningful words. It is better to shorten watery words even without substitution. Remember the golden rule: the meaning must prevail quantity. Without watery words your text may sound like a pleasant melody.

stuffing

Keyword stuffing

The word field occurs in the text 11 times. You need to reduce the density to 7 times.

The word wpi occurs in the text 9 times. You need to reduce the density to 7 times.

Anylysis without stop words

Keywords

Count

field

11

wpi

9

wanted

6

pursue

6

career

5

engineering

4

people

4

technology

4

like

4

academic

4

schedule

3

taking

3

society

3

opportunity

3

courses

3

women

3

forward

3

many

3

stem

3

summit

2

trip

2

feel

2

involvement

2

looking

2

girls

2

go

2

now

2

welcoming

2

clubs

2

seeing

2

working

2

organized

2

something

2

made

2

realize

2

already

2

really

2

including

2

experience

2

believe

2

important

2

fit

2

life

2

got

2

witness

2

will

2

help

1

balance

1

activities

1

beside

1

want

1

reach

1

look

1

well

1

students

1

offered

1

revealed

1

opened

1

achieve

1

high

1

year

1

sports

1

terms

1

extend

1

system

1

talent

1

real

1

discover

1

first

1

hope

1

strongly

1

possible

1

smoothly

1

future

1

make

1

community

1

meet

1

step

1

come

1

joined

1

new

1

moving

1

everyone

1

always

1

someone

1

school

1

fact

1

work

1

especially

1

jobs

1

passionate

1

exposure

1

happy

1

shows

1

woman

1

program

1

science

1

individual

1

glimpse

1

grabbed

1

attention

1

invited

1

variety

1

specifically

1

play

1

role

1

thought

1

anyone

1

can

1

continuously

1

today

1

chance

1

intimidated

1

encouraged

1

dreams

1

single

1

every

1

three

1

less

1

good

1

learning

1

also

1

received

1

great

1

select

1

satisfied

1

main

1

sub

1

person

1

Keyword stuffing refers to repeating same words or phrases too many times in the text. Stuffing the paper with same words/phrases affects the readability, quality, and it is unsightly.

RobotDon Recommends:

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Strategies to avoid keyword stuffing include:

  • Strive to avoid putting words together that sound similar
  • Avoid repeating words within sentences
  • Vary sentence length
  • Improve your vocabulary skills
  • Look for synonyms of the words you tend to repeat the most
  • Avoid incorrect phrases
  • Focus on the quality rather using certain words only to reach the word count
readability

Readability index

Gunning fog index

Current index: 8.74

Green zone, allowable index: 8

The difference between the result and green zone: 0.74

The Gunning Fog Index estimates the years of formal education a reader needs to understand the given text on the first reading. The test is primarily used to confirm that text can be read easily. Content for a wider audience needs a fog index less than 12 while text that requires near-universal understanding require an index less than 8.

To improve the text, go to the section "Rhythmic monotony ", make the indicators green.

Fog index67891011121314151617
Reading level by gradeSixth gradeSeventh gradeEighth gradeHigh school freshmanHigh school sophomoreHigh school juniorHigh school seniorCollege freshmanCollege sophomoreCollege juniorCollege seniorCollege graduate

RobotDon Recommends:

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Improve the readability of your text with the following strategies:

  • Avoid using passive voice and focus on active writing
  • Use formal language
  • Avoid contractions
  • Do not use abbreviations
  • Strive not to use cliché phrases or idioms, particularly if English is your second language
  • Avoid making paragraphs too long
  • Define difficult words using parentheses to elaborate their meaning
  • Do not use unnecessary words i.e. words and phrases that do not contribute to the meaning of the text
  • Consider editing your paper to make it more readable and easier to understand.
frequency

Word frequency

Word frequency is a vital aspect that contributes to the quality of the text. Pay attention to how many times you use certain words and phrases in order to avoid repetitive writing and wateriness. The statistics above show your score.

RobotDon Recommends:

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Consider editing the text in order to keep the frequency of the words within recommended limits.

  • Passive – overuse of passive voice throughout an essay can make prose seem uninteresting and flat.
  • Adverb – adverbs can enhance the meaning of your text, but when used excessively, they weaken the content.
  • Amplifiers – types of adverbs, used to amplify or make the meaning of an adjective or sentence stronger (definitely, very etc.)
  • Introductory words – they continuity from one sentence onto the other. Excessive use of introductory words makes the text redundant.
  • Preposition – overuse of prepositional phrases in a single sentence can obscure the primary subject and action of a sentence.
  • Union – irrational inclusion of this words induces the choppy effect.
  • Abstract – overuse of them makes the paper vague. Ideally, your paper should be precise, concise, and specific.